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In Need of Editing...
Aug. 13th, 2007 10:34 amPeter Hamilton.
The chrome is great, I'm just struggling to get to the plot. I know it's lurking in there somewhere but between the painstaking worldbuilding and the aliens it's a little bit smothered at the moment.
The chrome is great, I'm just struggling to get to the plot. I know it's lurking in there somewhere but between the painstaking worldbuilding and the aliens it's a little bit smothered at the moment.
